Jordyn likes writing. She loves drawing and colouring in pictures to match her writing. You are so clever, Jordyn. I love reading your stories.
The animals are scared of the fire.
They ran away into the cave.
By Jordyn
The animals are scared of the fire.
They ran away into the cave.
By Jordyn
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| A beautiful illustration done by Jordyn. |
Kia ora,
ReplyDeleteI am Miss Morgan and I work in Christchurch in Uru mÄnuka cluster. What a great drawing for your interesting writing. I love the way you have added how the animals stayed safe in the fire! I wonder how long they had to wait for the fire to go out? I hope someone managed to help them.
Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Greeting to you ,
ReplyDeleteI'm Lillyana and I'm a year 7 at the same school as you !! you have done an amazing upon drawing and coloring your tiger and a giraffe !! Keep up the amazing work !
Kind Regards ,
Lillyana
Kia orana Jordyn,
ReplyDeleteYour drawing which explains your writing is so creative! I like the colours and aspects you featured in your piece of drawing.
Keep up the creative drawing and amazing pieces of writing.
Kind Regards,
Leilani
Great drawing and story Jordyn! Your picture is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteHi room 18 I like the tiger but it would be nice if you add more detail in the tiger
ReplyDeletei like the tiger but just add a little detall
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